After I looked at what I had written below I chose to write on Chapter 4 and create 5 beginning and ending sentences for that chapter.
Chapter 1: The Wonder Years (early childhood)
Chapter 2: Boy Crazy (12 to 22)
Chapter 3: 13 years of Hassle for a Tassel (High School graduation)
Chapter 4: Out on my own (The first 4 years of college)
Chapter 5: A New Beginning (Moving back home, struggles with school, meeting the love of my life).
Chapter 4: Out on my own
Beginning Sentences
Beginning Sentences
- Freshly 18 when I graduated high school, I was anxious to start my college life away from the grasp of my family and finally able to make decisions on my own.
- The day of move-in was hot and humid; my dad didn't get to come and help me so my mom, myself and my grandparents took the 30 minute trip to college to get me settled.
- I woke that morning wondering what this new life would be like, praying that I'd like my roommate and that I would make friends easily.
- Everyone told me that these would be the years of my life I would remember the most but little did I know they were both right and wrong; there was so much I'd later want to forget.
- The summer before college flew by and slowly I began to see how much my life was going to change over the course of the next four years.
Ending Sentences
- Packing up my apartment to go back home was both sad and happy; I wanted to take the good with me and leave the bad in those halls and rooms.
- Four years had gone by but I was still so far behind everyone my age and suddenly I knew that I needed to make a change.
- I never wanted to admit that my parents were right in having me come home, but looking back it was good to remove me from my toxic environment.
- I felt so alone as I looked around my small and empty room; I had come there with promise and I was leaving with a feeling of defeat.
- Looking back on the roller coaster that was the years 2003 to 2007 I wondered where would I be 4 years from now?
Which of those beginning and ending sentences do you think work best (I guess just based on what little some of you might know about me)?
4 comments:
I would choose both number 4's. I think they saw a lot.
Love the line "Hassle for a Tassel". Ain't that the truth!
And it sounds like you got a lot of material to write about in your college years ... those are the years that really show you what you are made of and appreciate your parents more I think.
Hope you have many more chapters!
Visiting from Mama Kats...
I think they all work together. Sounds like you have a story to tell.
Stopping by from Mama Kat's.
PS I read your post below and I have cohabitated in my single days. For whatever it is worth, the man that proposed to me within 12 months of meeting was the one I never lived with. I think keeping the mystery alive probably speeds things up a bit and keeps everyone on their toes.
The worst is when you hassle for a tassel and then end up being a stay at home mom and realize it was all for nothing! But this isn't about me. :) Loved all your chapters!!
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